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Originality- Does it Exist???

If it's all been said and done before, than what are any of us doing

Before I was old enough to know that everything had been done and said before, I didn't think about whether or not what I was doing was original, I just created,led by childhood's intuition and enthusiasm. Expression was spontaneous and joyful. Once I began to gain some skill at drawing and writing, my own standards drove me to feel dissatisfied with my own work, unless it reached some internally recognised level of "goodness". At that point I would feel somewhat satisfied with what I had created. Still, I didn't question the originality of my work. It was mine, wasn't it?

Because I wrote in complete reclusion from other writers, until a couple of years ago, I had no idea if what I was doing was good, bad, origonal, cliched, intelligent- I had written purely for myself for many years and shown no one my poetry. I guess I never had anyone to show it to, and the few times I attempted to share it, I received strange responses. Mostly confused looks or blank stares. It wasn't encouraging, so I kept my writing to myself.

It was only in community with other poets that I learned some things I should probably be embarrassed to admit. But I'm not. The truth is the truth. I was writing (and still am to a lesser degree) by the seat of my pants, by the skin of my teeth- however you want to put it, I, technically, had not a friggin' clue in the world, what I was doing. I had a lot to learn. I still do. But the thing I was hit with was, one of the worst things a writer could ever do, was to use phrases, metaphors, similes and the like, that are as common as a dandelion. At the same time I was digesting that, I was swallowing a horrible reality; everything has already been said and written about before. EVERYTHING. It was all over a long time ago. I could be shining Shakespeare's shoes right now and I wouldn't have a shot. Well, what the hell! Dig a hole and throw me in it with all my pathetic scrawlings. I hate poetry.

But the problem is, I love poetry. Oh, God. Kill me now...... The good news: I can delay my suicide another 24 hours. Why? Prepare to throw up. No one is like me. Yep. I said it.....Sicko, huh? No and yes. The truth is, that in this uniquely demented, wondrously, idiotically, defiantly creative state, I am an original. Having struggled all my life to fit in somewhere, I ended up fitting in nowhere and that just might be good news. If you end up alone and fitting in nowhere, you either die or you invent worlds. The great thing about invented worlds is that they are beautiful and you are the queen. So, I spent my entire childhood and youth (and secretly my adulthood) living in my imagination. Everything is possible there. All possibilities are in your pocket, just waiting for you to reach for them. Being original is a given. Now some of you might be thinking, then you have become your own God! Well, God is certainly an original and not a bad thing to imitate...hehehehe....Why not?...Be free...Think whatever the hell you want. And then write about it.The great thing is, there's always editing. And more editing. That's called intentional originality.

So, what's the most original idea you ever had that you found out wasn't? And what do you wish no one had ever written about before so you could be the very first? Pretend you're a kid and everything's possible like it never really was but we didn't know it until when? Are we better or worse for knowing? My childhood sucked, but the wonder of being a child, I can remember hiding a piece of that. What does your piece look like? Mine looks like the loved off nose of a velveteen rabbit. 

 

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Comments

Colleen - on May 5 2008

very good questions.. hmm.. not sure what I hope wasn't ever written about so that I could.  I am not that far into the writing thing yet, I'm still trying to just get started!  But your questions make me think..hmm...

Do you know of other good websites for poets/poetry.. the more knowledge the better... well, maybe! hahaha.


ShannonV - on May 5 2008

So, what's the most origional idea you ever had that you found out wasn't? I don't really know, but.. I did have this theory brewing in my head for like.. a few months.. which I wont share, but it was very specific, and used a certain analogy, and I thought it was pretty insightful/clever, and I hadn't yet gotten around to fully formulating/writing it down. And then I read it in a fucking Palahniuk novel (Rant). Summarized in like.. a paragraph. And it kind of broke my heart into a million tiny pieces of pretentious sadness. I still harbor the secret hope that my idea is more clever/can be better expressed but...now I can't reveal it because hipsters are going to think I copied Palahniuk. Which I'd never (intentionally) do.

And what do you wish no one had ever written about before so you could be the very first? Lots and lots of things.

Pretend you're a kid and everything's possible like it never really was but we didn't know it until when? I can't go back to that headspace, unfortunately. And actually I can't recall a time in my life where I actually felt anything was possible. I think I've been boringly realistic forever. Though I do definitely realize more of my limitations now. 

Are we better or worse for knowing? Uh- better I think insomuch as that it's more true- and I think truth is important. But worse in that it's less pleasant.

Well, Shan, I guess I'm not a hipster cuz I would have believed you. Can't you still use your amazing idea by changing it up just a little? It sucks to toss it in the bin just because Palanuik wrote something similiar. Maybe he's a mind-thief, trolling writer's sites. A simple voodoo ritual would reveal his sordid methods. Tee hee. Ummm, boringly realistic? Maybe you're realistic but I don't think for a second that you're boring. Calling Pepe le Peu a cat rapist is not boring. In fact, it rather alarmed me. I like it when people do stuff that shakes me up a bit. Otherwise I nod off....Catherine



ShannonV - on May 5 2008

And to answer the question of originality (that is the correct spelling- you repeatedly misspelled it- I forgive you, I just had to point it out because I'm lame) existing... I'm not sure. But I do feel like claiming "everything has been said before" can be an excuse to not even try to form unique thoughts. So when someone is like "yeah, that's kind of cliche" you can just say "OH WELL, EVERYTHINGS CLICHE! Not my fault!" Which I think is a coping device so they don't have to face the horrid reality that perhaps, there are cool new things to be said, but saying them requires a brilliant mind... which they do not posses.

 

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Shan, I totally agree with you. I mean, we could all just lie down and die right now and not write another word because, why bother, right? But the difference is in having something intelligent or...*gasp*..brilliant to say. We've always got room for more of that because lord knows the stupid people are talking a mile a minute. It would be nice to have some balance in the world. Thanks for pointing out my dilaudid induced mispelling. I swear, my brain is turning into Cream'o'Wheat. Help me!!!!...C


Laurie - on May 5 2008

My thoughts are similar; everything HAS been done before, but if somehow you bring a slightly different slant to the topic or reach a different audience with your words... you have done something that is originally you. People do not give up reading new books and poems because it has been done before... they wish to enjoy reading again and again, each time with a different setting or viewpoint or outcome...etc. The same is true for the writer...do not give up doing that which gives you so much pleasure just because it has been written about before... your unique life and circumstances contribute to what is uniquely your writing.

 

 

Brava!!! I totally agree with you, too, Laurie! Subtle nuance of all sorts may take one thing and alter it in literally a million differnt ways- and then you have subjectivity- why, no one sees the same thing the same way anyways, so go at it with gusto. Why should any writer assume any subject or genre is off limits because it's overdone, done better or better off avoided. says who? I say break all the rules with brilliance and creativity and make them love every minute of it!...Catherine

 


Jen - on May 5 2008
 

Just because something has been done before, it doesn't mean that it can't be improved upon. 

Since we do have the ability to think and act independently, I'd say originality does exist:)


Celticlion - on May 5 2008
Hi, Colleen! I think it's great that even though you are just getting kind of started into this writing thing, you're thinking about a lot of different questions and opportunities to learn more. To be honest, this is the best site I've found so far but I am also a member at the Bulldog Poetry workshop where you tend to get a few more reviews. It's a much smaller community. I find just talking with other writters about their work and asking questions of myself about my own can be really eye opening. Sometimes (well, all the time) I read my own stuff like Joe Blow might and try to see it through their eyes. Then I ask myself a bunch of questions, like, why did you use that metaphor instead of? Or did you intentionally format the poem to give it a sense of quickening pace because it feels hurried. Be your own critic. And don't be afraid to be extremely critical of other people's work. Doesn't mean you have to tell them. But it gives you a keener more observant eye. Best of poetry to you!...C
Colleen - on May 5 2008
Thanks for the information on the other site.  I'm very happy here and I really feel this is a great site to learn not only the craft but so much more.  However, I was just looking to see what else was out there.  I didn't want to miss anything that could be helpful!  have a good night and thanks again!
Celticlion - on May 6 2008
Dear Jen, I definately agree about the improvement part but I'm not sure about the independent part- I say that because two people could technically say the exact same thing. Are they both original? I guess it wouldn't matter if they weren't both saying something that wasn't brilliant, interesting or relevant. Does that make sense? Jeez, I don't even know what I'm saying now. Are morons ever original? Hehehehe...Thanks for your input...C
Rws - on May 8 2008

It would most likely be impossible to be completely original in the sense of "invention" without creating an entirely new language with its own rules of grammar while lying on a beach on another planet. Words being the limited molecules that they are, it would require much more than combining and recombining them to form a unique work.

Nope, I believe an entirely different point of view/perspective/mental illness would be essential to create something even remotely out of the ordinary.

And then critics would lament that it couldn't be understood and doesn't follow "the known rules" of its discipline.

So then it would be doubly doomed.

Bill


Anstey - on May 8 2008

Why would complete originality be the goal?

When it comes to DNA, it turns out there's not that much difference between mice and men.

Mice and humans each have about 30,000 genes, yet only 300 are unique to either organism. Both even have genes for a tail, even though it's not "switched on" in humans.

"About 99 percent of genes in humans have counterparts in the mouse," said Eric Lander, Director of the Whitehead Institute Center for Genomic Research in Cambridge, Massachusetts. "Eighty percent have identical, one-to-one counterparts."

http://archives.cnn.com/2002/T...sc.mousegenome/
 

 I think newness, vibrance and originality are not ONLY about something that has never been thought of or spoken before, it's about taking old things and looking at them in new ways. Or taking several old things and combining them in a new order or a new context.

The words themselves are only partly responsible for the messages conveyed. When the words are said/written has a tremendous bearing on their meaning as does the audience to which they are presented. 

A good example of this is a stump speech. Same words recited over and over, and yet it's almost a completely different speech if it's said in Hawaii vs. Nebraska, if it's said after a victory, or before, whether it's said to partisans or undecideds.

The same is true for any sort of writing or communication.

Another example is the Gettysburg Address. No one would claim it is original now, and yet when an audience of 4th graders hears it for the first time, and their teacher explains it it can be. 

Well, you can say that that's not really the question here, but to me it seems like maybe it is. there's this tendency to think originality is this exploding newness where no part of the thing has ever existed or been thought of or created before.

But let's go back to that article. A mouse and a man share 99% genes in common. the ideas behind each are virtually indentical. the hearts, the skin, the hair, the eyes, the ears, the tongues, the bones, they're all the same stuff. Is a man not original because he is made up of the same primal bits as a mouse? 

Ideas and words are similar in a way. An idea that is 99% the same as another idea is still a 100% different thing.

It is not the ways we are the same that define us, it is the ways we are different.

 

 

 

 

 


Celticlion - on May 8 2008
YES!!!! That's exactly how I feel about it Anstey, only you have articulated it with greater precision than I could have. And Bill, I do see your point as well, technically- but I agree that "complete originality", as in absolute and total, isn't the goal, but creating something that feels or comes across as original for a variety of reasons (many just written of in Anstey's comment).This is why I do believe in originality and in my ability to write something someone might read and think, wow, that's something I've never read before. It is possible and worth attempting because I remember so vividly the first time I read, "Jane Eyre"- I stayed up all night long, a fourteen year old girl transfixed, mesmerised and full of admiration for Jane. It was as though that book had been written just for me. I needed a Jane to give me courage and faith and quiet resolve in the face of my own turbulent life. So many books were like for me. They were powerful. The characters in them were closer to my heart than the people in my life because I saw in them something I wanted to be. Every new generation that comes is full of children reading these books for the first time. Everything is new at some point in your life. That is where I want some part of my head and heart to live somehow and not be jaded and worn down by a reality that tells me nothing matters or "you can't"...Okay, enough out of me. Thanks for your input guys...C
Mellanie Carney - on Jul. 9 2009

I am sure originality does in fact exist. Evolution proves that, even if the differences are minute.

But who needs it?

I can read ten poems focused on the same subject matter, all penned by different authors, all worded differently, with a different rythm...and they all invoke in me a different response, a certain mood, different scenes in my mind's eye. And I am still excited, inspired, and pleased to read them.




Sometimes I wonder if men and women really suit each other. Perhaps they should live next door and just visit now and then.
Sinnaminsun - on Jul. 11 2009

Very interesting topic.  I think back when I wasn't aware of certain "writing faults", and I was much more prolific and maybe a bit more creative too.  I didn't think about cliche's, forced rhyme, broken meter, or what's been done before, I just wrote to write. Sometimes thinking too much about what poetry should or shouldn't be can stifle the whole writing process. Still, it's important to learn the basics, and about what good writing is, even though it might feel a bit stifling.   I do think that true originality exists, and it happens when you read poetry from poets who have taken something common and made the reader see, feel, or view something in a way unexpected or new.  To illustrate this, I always go back to Ranier Maria Rilke and his poem:

"The Panther"

His vision, from the constantly passing bars,
has grown so weary that it cannot hold
anything else. It seems to him there are
a thousand bars; and behind the bars, no world.

As he paces in cramped circles, over and over,
the movement of his powerful soft strides
is like a ritual dance around a center
in which a mighty will stands paralyzed.

Only at times, the curtain of the pupils
lifts, quietly--. An image enters in,
rushes down through the tensed, arrested muscles,
plunges into the heart and is gone.

Rainer Maria Rilke


 


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