May 16, 2025
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Emily Rose Babbles
Ummm, any easier way to keep the line breaks? I mean other than manually adding them with the page content thing down there?
Ripples
The sky shudders
black upon the lake
and it ripples
onto mooncloth skin
kissing ivory
birthed pink blossom
thumb printed angry
purple brown
So she dives
leaving her soul
to rest on the shore
her mind to fly
in dark shadows
through the trees
scaring the bats
to scar the sky
She dives
down through sheets
of satin depths
she trolls mucky
reaches seeing through
finger tender touches
and plunges
elbow deep
..........
Letting go she
floats breaking
the surface
to ascend, emerge
oil satin skinned
dripping stars
spilling over
the slumbered soul
flowing beneath
the groundless mind
She the river
running toward
her longing her
ocean
She ripples.
Poem
- Prompt from local writers workshop
| Dave said..... |
| Indefensible |
| Two |
| Tall Good Looking Girl - My writing group suggested that my writing has a lush, seductive quality with rich images even when I do not intend any of that. I was told there is even a warm, inviting tone in the way I read. Now, that was said as a criticism, not a compliment. I was challenged to write in plain language from an ordinary place. Thing is. I had remembered doing that for an entire period of my writing. Ok, I'm babbling. For what it's worth, here is one of them. Sigh, I like lush. I think it's purty.
PS. Tis old and I am no even older, |
| Velvet |
| In Hope Of A Poem - A Fairy Tale - P'Shaw - Edits are needed but time, and life at present does not allow. Do you not hate it when you break your own rules? Hmmm, contradicting yourself is so very, berry. |
| Victim |
| Karma |
| Emotional Arrest - Old stuff. |
| Werewolf Moments - Cliche' - I know. I dug for imagery here, started with the prompt, which is the title, a discussion, a line that played in my head.
Cliche' playing upon cliche', but I kind of like it, . |
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