
Without the / marks this would read so very fast; just like sex on cocaine would transpire. I like the rhythm and wonder if the slashes were intended for line breaks. I love the feel of the frantic frenetic energy in this.
----- LIFE: I messed up, can I have a 'do over'?
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!

I was just thinking today about you and wishing I could read your poetry again. WISH GRANTED. This poem is sexy, and I love the last three lines. (I will taste you anyday..)

I was thinking how I'd love to hear you read this one. It has a frenetic powerful pace to it that begs to be read.