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Without the / marks this would read so very fast; just like sex on cocaine would transpire. I like the rhythm and wonder if the slashes were intended for line breaks. I love the feel of the frantic frenetic energy in this.
----- LIFE: I messed up, can I have a 'do over'?
by Rene' on Feb. 27 2008