
I find this form one of the most difficult to work with, so I am in deep appreciation of this. Plus, the form fits the subject beautifully.

Indeed, a very creative use of the form. If you wanted to, you could stick some punctuation in to guide readers but it's not entirely necessary. I like the implication that fantasies are not all tea and biscuits -- even childhood dreams embrace all facets of human nature, including the quarrelsome and even bigoted. But they're still human and capable of immense beauty.

So I'm slow, but I was liking it one its own before I realized the difficult form you undertook (I've only seen them done with each letter getting a new line). Lovely, enchanted. Punctuation, well sure, but it is fine without too.