
I like the word frail there. The slight alliteration is adds a certain emphasis then the long assonance at the end really compliments the long sound of breeze.
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my father bent, frail, (September 2004) ![]() I like the word frail there. The slight alliteration is adds a certain emphasis then the long assonance at the end really compliments the long sound of breeze.
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