What I'd like from you Dear Reader....

In addition to the most excellent site guidelines for criticism, what I'd love to see from anyone gracious enough to respond to my piffle...are questions. In fact, I'd much rather see your questions than your suggestions. If something's not making sense to you or if you're not sure why I'd want to change tone mid-way through a poem, I want to know. Cause chances are, if you've got a question then I've probably got some rewriting to do. Well that or you've been completly mystified by my awe-inspiring way with words and want to learn from me....(yeah...right... anyhoo...) So if you choose to read, and you just don't get it, or you just can't understand why on earth I'd do something the way I did...please, feel free. Just leave me a note. I'll appreciate it. I might even pay you back someday.