
I love that nipples line. It's not just that it's funny, which it really is, but that it's so true. That is such a perfect snippet of reality in today's internet reality.

PMSL Leanne, I can only aspire to being as near perfect as you. As for nipples...mmmmmmmmm nyum nyum nyum....
:P
Mos.

When it's all dead and sung, it seems everything comes down to nipples. Hopefully I've left that one open for a weeping riposte...
[ellipsis rules - my rules, but apologies all the same]

I really enjoyed reading this. It made me smile but has a sort of biting truth to it. the 6th stanza is my favorite.

"So this is the face that launched a thousands dips and scorched the topless bimbos on Facebook."
~Mephistopheles:The Musical Comedy
If I take nothing seriously, it's all your fault for encouraging my lunacy. Nathan says hello, btw.

Hello all, I am pleased you are impressed by nipples.
I think this is largely complete now, it's been revised quite a few times but there's always room for more improvement. I gather from the lack of suggestions that maybe I've done my job.

Belated observation; S6, change of rhythm, a plague of anapests?
Largely done, I guess. S7 doesn't stop, but that's merely a fastidious end to it.
Except [*twisted slime*] - please consider (before dismissing) 'so nobody's where she belongs.' It rounds out the melange of displacement (?).

this is very good. and yes, love the nipples line.
Sometimes I wonder if men and women really suit each other. Perhaps they should live next door and just visit now and then.
Sometimes I wonder if men and women really suit each other. Perhaps they should live next door and just visit now and then.