
This is pretty interesting actually. I am not sure about whether i think it completely works or not, but I think it works enough for me.

Thanks Stephan. Oriiginally, I planned to have a much longer piece with this. Then I got to the last line and got stumped for a while. It dawned on me as I thought about progressing the piece, that the "white noise" ending was the only one that really fit my philosophy, so stuck with that.
I agree, it works, though not the way one would expect and not quite how I originally concieved it.
Mos.