I don't smoke

If I smoked, I would lean across the table right now,

(one soft brown arm decorated with bangles)

to push my cigarette into the almost overflowing ashtray

and so that you could get a good view down the front of my shirt.

well i do smoke but i dont need an excuse to flash you.

this is a lovely image... not just b/c i know you wrote it and therefore it conjures up pleasant images. its.. coy.

i wrote coy and thought in my head LIKE A FISH. which makes no sense.

ilu

actually it DOES make sense b/c a coy is a kind of fish. uggh. i'm a dumbass.

sorry for the useless comments. KEEP POSTING. i read it.

Norm -
There's a world of nuance and suggestion in this little poem. Well done, indeed.

Callooh -
This is wonderful... I love well written tight poetry. makes me wish I smoked...

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