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Dandelion Love

As a boy I used to go pick Dandelions for my mom and give them to her. With Mother's Day coming up next month, I got this idea to write her a poem about it. I will take any help I can get to make this perfect for her, have at it.

 

As a young boy I knew early
How girls enjoy receiving
Flowers as gifts or just because

I still remember your smiles when
Grubby and stained I walked through the front door
And gave you my Dandelion Love

Weeds they may have been
And our own front yard
Was as far as I had gone

But they were picked with such care
And given with such pride
That you couldn't help but accept my Dandelion Love

Now that I am grown
And realize roses they were not
Nor of tulips were my bouquets made of

To you they were as precious as any
Because that's how I said, "I Love You!"
When as your little boy I gave you my Dandelion Love

And even now I find myself in that same yard
With your Grandsons at my side gathering
As they hold up their collections to see if I approve

"Will Bami like this one?" they ask
Tears forming as I nod to their excited faces
And so once again, Mom, we give you our Dandelion Love

Anstey - on Apr. 5 2008

As a young boy I knew early
How girls enjoy receiving
Flowers as gifts or just because

I still remember your smiles when,
Grubby and stained, I walked through the front door
And gave you my Dandelion Love

they may have been weeds
And (our own front yard
Was as far as I had gone)

But they were picked with such care [What is a better verb for 'picked with care?]
And given with such pride
That you couldn't help but accept my Dandelion Love

Now that I am grown
And I realize they were not roses
Nor of tulips were my bouquets made of

To you they
were as precious as any
Because that's how I they said, "I Love You!"
When as from your little boy I gave you my Dandelion Love

And even now I find myself in that same yard
With your Grandsons at my side gathering
As they hold up their collections to see if I approve

"Will Bami like this one?" they ask
Tears forming as I nod to their excited faces

Once again, Mom, we give you our Dandelion Love


Anstey - on Apr. 5 2008
I think the first step here would be to cut this down pretty good and see where you stand after that.
Garrett - on Apr. 5 2008

Thank you, I will deffinately consider your suggestions. I appreciate your input.

Garrett


Anstey - on Apr. 5 2008
I think this will be an amazing gift to your mom. She will LOVE it.
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