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Wrecking

Here, in Sligo, the yellow whin
punctuates mountain sheets of shale;
a churning sky is flapping full of wind -
the same that smashed Armada's Spanish sails.

Appropriate coast for thoughts of foundering:
your shipwrecked marriage, an aftermath of drowning
in that roomy house where family photographs
reveal a fuller past through present griefs.

Where you alone survive like sea-lost Ishmael
warning me with wounds and tales of tears.
You keep a lighthouse now, a beam to marshal
my own dangerous drift with guiding steers.

So when she phones me here in Ireland
I warm again to the shock of her voice,
defying the vast armadas we will face
in distant prospect of wave-torn England.

Anstey - on Mar. 20 2008

I had to look up whin, very cool. I love that opening stanza. It sets the whole piece.

In the last stanza, the initial 'So' seems a bit extraneous to me. 

My favorite line, by far, "Appropriate coast for thoughts of foundering" and the marriage being worked in right there. It's rock'n'roll poetry.


U668857 - on Mar. 20 2008

Many thanks, Anstey.

Yeah - whin or gorse (more Scottish) - there's alot of it on the west coast of Ireland.

I was back visiting recently - lots of signs re. the "Spanish Armada" trail. That whole coastline must be littered with ancient shipwrecks. It was a case of trying to reinvigorate the old dead metaphor of things being "on the rocks"....BRgds.,Alan.


Anstey - on Mar. 21 2008
Clearly the metaphor isn't dead, just in bad shape. you did well with it.
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