
I had to look up whin, very cool. I love that opening stanza. It sets the whole piece.
In the last stanza, the initial 'So' seems a bit extraneous to me.
My favorite line, by far, "Appropriate coast for thoughts of foundering" and the marriage being worked in right there. It's rock'n'roll poetry.

Many thanks, Anstey.
Yeah - whin or gorse (more Scottish) - there's alot of it on the west coast of Ireland.
I was back visiting recently - lots of signs re. the "Spanish Armada" trail. That whole coastline must be littered with ancient shipwrecks. It was a case of trying to reinvigorate the old dead metaphor of things being "on the rocks"....BRgds.,Alan.