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I had to look up whin, very cool. I love that opening stanza. It sets the whole piece.
In the last stanza, the initial 'So' seems a bit extraneous to me.
My favorite line, by far, "Appropriate coast for thoughts of foundering" and the marriage being worked in right there. It's rock'n'roll poetry.
by Anstey on Mar. 20 2008