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More in MosquitoBytes Volume 11: Der Sturz von Uriel - 2007-2008

Kälte die Nacht

Tödliche Liebe

Cold is the night
Just like my eyes
They stay that way
Sunrise to sunrise

Heavens dead
When you are there
See the witches
That took me here

Dying sun
Dwarf brown light
Cannot hide enemies
Eternal night

Death remains
Never change
Wolf lies dying
Riddled with mange

Riddled with mange
Wolf lies dying
Never change
Death remains

Eternal night
Cannot hide my enemies
Dwarf brown light
Dying sun

That took me here
See the witches
When you are there
Heavens dead

Sunrise to sunrise
They stay that way
Just like my eyes
Cold is the night

© 2008, Mosquitobyte

Rene' - on Feb. 28 2008

This is a revision, is it not? I am trying to recall all of the first one in my head but I do know this...this one reads smoother. You did a great job within your form too! I really like this one Mos. 

----- LIFE: I messed up, can I have a 'do over'?




I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!
Mosquitobyte - on Feb. 28 2008

Thanks Rene, yes it is a slight revision, based on the ever helpful suggestion of Leanne and other. Also I now deem it worthy of inclusion in Volume 11, hence it's new location.

 

Mos


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