
This is one of your most poignant pieces that I read so far! It actually has hope in its lines. The last stanza is wonderful, 'made you save yourself'. Really a well done poem Mos.
---- could someone turn the world back over, I'm getting dizzy!
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!

*bows graciously, turns to walk away and trips over pretty red tail*
SPLAT!!!!!!!!
*Smiles sheepishly at screen and tucks apendage back into pants.*

You made me laugh, first thing in the morning too!
----- could someone turn the world back over, I'm getting dizzy!
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!