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More in MosquitoBytes Volume 04: Ruminative Relic - 2005

Bitch

Amaranthine Fetish

When no one's left
To hear me scream
No one left but you
Hold me baby
Hold me next to you
I wanna be the one
The one to rend her heart
Tear it from her body
And let the fucker watch
Let me baby
Let me cry instead of scream
Gotta let this pain flow out
This knife here
This knife so blunt and lean
Preying on me
It preys in my mind
Lay down on me
She lies down on my heart
I can't get that fucker off
Take this scream away from me
Hold me baby
Hold me in my dream
I can't hold myself
Myself is in so deep
I cannot even cry
So let me bleed now
Then read it back to me
Tell me baby
Tell me that it's not my screams
That I heard in the nights
That the bitch is just a dream

© 2005, Mosquitobyte

Rene' - on Jan. 6 2008

I think you have a typo in line 2, should be 'hear' instead of 'here'. Another killer reader, filled with angst, anger, and pain. Again, I see the knife in this one as well. Will read on to see if it is a pattern. 

----- just wandering the maze of hallways in my bent mind!




I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!
Mosquitobyte - on Jan. 6 2008
Thanks for spotting the typo Rene, now fixed. It's always hard proof reading your own stuff I say.
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