
This is interesting to me. I'm curious if the lack of line-breaks is due to formatting error of site or a conscious author choie? I actually like it.

I've always been very aware of persentation, oft my poems appear crass purely because of the way I present them, part of my little (and long running) joke.

I don't know how clever you are with your text presentation and such... but you know, I can picture this in a spiral form. Maybe I need more whisky though.