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Tongues Have Bad Days Too
Why is it some days
The words come out wrong?
Can’t carry a tune,
Can’t sing a song.
Everything you say
Comes out a mistake.
Like your tongue
Turned into a rattle snake.
You hiss and you spit
To get the words out,
But nobody knows
What you’re talking about.
Why is it some days
Your tongue can’t get a long?
Everything you say
Comes out wrong.
- Jennifer Ragan
Famous children's author....just nobody knows it yet
on May 31 2007
from Camillus, New York
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1- Shannon McEwen
on May 31 2007
Okay, first I like.
Suggestions:
In S2, L3, perhaps add a "Has" before turned?
In S3, L3, I think it's "Along"
:)
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.