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Tongues Have Bad Days Too
Tongues can have VERY good days too:P Although that would be adult poetry and not kiddy!
Okay, first I like.
Suggestions:
In S2, L3, perhaps add a "Has" before turned?
In S3, L3, I think it's "Along"
:)
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Okay, first I like.
Suggestions:
In S2, L3, perhaps add a "Has" before turned?
In S3, L3, I think it's "Along"
:)
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
by Shannon McEwen on May 31 2007