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Shakespeare's Monkeys

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More in ergo sum hominus

17. doleo

i suffer

we sit atop a ferris wheel
two football fields away
from the angry place
the river rushes and boys
from time to time, invite
death to save them from
love.

we sit atop a ferris wheel
two football fields away
from the joyful place
our lips will lock and learn
that time is stationary
that a kiss is a promise
and promises must be
kept.

we sit atop a ferris wheel
two football fields away
from the eternal place
where souls were saved
for 80 years until God
left.

we sit atop a ferris wheel
two football fields away
from the soft place
where life was gentle

oh the lie.

but love,
that hurts

but love,
that pain, is true.

Alcuin of York - on May 18 2007
S1: I don’t get the comma on L5. Are we supposed to infer one at the end of L4?
So there is no joy in Mudville, even regarding love? See: “Praying”.
I’m not sure what “the soft place” means, but my impression is that it is a church or churchyard. What makes this one intriguing is who the "we" is sitting atop the ferris wheel. In summary, this is a bit hard to decipher, but it IS interesting. It draws us in to speculate. And that makes it a pretty good write.
Alcuin
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