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1- Derma Kaput on Apr. 3 2007

I really like this poem for its simplicity of expression and the way you turn the line breaks.   But with lots of poems I like, I make minor rewrites in my head.  I'd rarely mention them to anyone (because its terribly presumptuous) but here's how I approached yours:

Cards laid flat
up and down
can be interpreted
in so many ways

maybe it is in the grain
of your face or my hands
on the table

2- EmilyRose on Apr. 4 2007

Derma Kaput:

Know what? I was playing with the line and stanza breaks, and, lol, mine were almost exactly like yours! One difference, but I do think I like yours better! Thanks!

3- Anstey on Apr. 4 2007

Derma knows poetry.

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• stephan

4- Anstey on Apr. 4 2007

Possibly because he's so old he's had a chance to read it all.

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• stephan

5- Anstey on Apr. 4 2007

or maybe not.

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• stephan

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