
I am thinking the typo and the mistake in the first line are intentional. I am thinking you might want to exagerate it a bit more for the rushed effect.
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- stephan

fyi, i love this.
Not just the moment capture, or the morbid thought, but that i have had the exact same thought. And actually, I too say it aloud or jot it down. My wife hates that I think.
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- stephan