- Anstey on Feb. 16 2007 - #
- I might like stanzas with this. I Like this a lot though. the verb 'dancing' didn't seem quite right to me but otherwise...reallyw ell done.
- stephan
- Aesthetic Psychosis on June 26 2007 - #
I'm inclined to agree with Anstey on this.
'Danced' doesn't seem the right verb to describe the grain.
I do, however, like the poem to a large extent.