Poetry in the there and when

There she is, fat and sickly sweet:
the here; the now.
held holy by wisemen and sanctified
in poetry I hate.

All from the heart and blessed true
I spit vinegar and puke
on her ass, and call her
out, the cunt she is.

I dance with tomorrow
and every twisted unholy
sinful dream -- wretched and bleeding.

I lick pus from the wound
between her legs
and live there one cum after another
her back arching as she screams
begs -- prays for more.
and more.
and more.

You go kiss the sow upon her fetid cheek
and call her perfect
as critics and cumsucking
poets are so wont to do.

I will fuck tomorrow and all my dreams
one orgasm at a time.

Damn the poets and their craving
for such banal things as
photographs and limp
cocks dragging through the unshaved
pussies of their sycophants.

Damn the poets and their lust
for those simple rhythms
that are the minds least favorite coitus.

Bless the whore who buys my book,
and all her family with the treasure
I gave her yesterday.

She could give a damn for rhythm.
She is honest when she takes my gold.

ShannonV -
Congratulations, you sick fuck, this totally made me grimace and feel revultion. Which isn't an easy task. I love the last two lines. This may be my fav. things I've read by you.. b/c I'm a sick fuck too. Also.. you need a way better title.

ShannonV -

Damn the poets and their craving
for such banal things as
photographs and limp
cocks dragging through the unshaved
pussies of their sycophants.

Also, favorite stanza. Sycophants is such a great word.

Celticlion -
I'm in agreement with Shannon, but I don't know you well enough to call you a sick fuck. Still, this gave me quite a repulsed chuckle and I love stuff that makes me giggle and want to swig some Pepto Bismal or something. Shit, I want to just write witht the same freedom you have here but I censor myself out of fear of disapproval. Can a woman say this same stuff and get away with it? What the hell is "getting away with it" anyway? I dunno. It's a damned entertaining write and it does say something about what is currently "cherished" in the poetry world. I hate the word "cherish"....C

Anstey -
I know that Shannon and Leanne have no problem being sick as (or sicker than) me, and I never think twice about it. Nor do I recall anyone here thinking anything out loud other than.. "man this site is twisted."

ShannonV -

Can a woman say this same stuff and get away with it?

No, absolutely not. Believe me. Well- you can, but everyone will just think you are a dick. Men- it just comes off as "edgy" or something. It's all really fair and not sexist at all.

Also, yeah, "cherish" is a totally lame word. I much prefer "churlish"

Also, Anstey: would you consider replacing "cumsucking" with "cumguzzling"? I think it's more.. you know, guzzly.

ShannonV -
...or maybe you can work in "cumdumpster". I think that word is hilarious.

Anstey -
Actually, i tend to agree that in society in general you'd probably run into issues -- on this site, i really don't think so. There's a tendency to view you as 'non-dickish' and 'delightfully edgy' (perhaps even nobly churlish)

I shall ponder your cum-tastic suggestions.

ShannonV -

Well, you think I'm awesome because you know me well enough to see this obvious hidden truth. But I'm positive there are people on this site who think that I'm a bit of an obnoxious douche- (luckily I don't give a fuck). Because really, generally women in any situation will get more shit for speaking like this. Or just being generally unsmiley/uncute and straight-forward and honest in their opinions. I notice it- like.. when my peers have male professors who are very unsmiling/serious.. they can still be appreciated- and are usually respected for it. Similar female professors? Everyone just calls them uptight bitches. It's been proven in studies- but more importantly I've totally noticed it and that's proof enough. But yes, I'm delightful. I don't know about nobly churlish but goodtimes anyway.