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Flurry (Draft)

Cascading flash tripping down
tenor tone bounces jumping, leaping from the head

Muted squawk interjects tart exclamation point piercing the run
swing back through an alto weave darting across the ride

Flurry breaks to a mellow coronet conversation
answers, melding into the flow of low swing

Low pulse thumps and rises, countering
flash and blaze of harmonized conversation

Bounding back to the final declaration
in a haze of blurred euphony

 

Tracey - on Oct. 17 2008

Deserving of the title "Regie" or word/instrument jazz. Sharp, smooth and very cool.

 


Vidalia - on Oct. 18 2008

I don't feel confident with critiquing yet but wanted to give my impression.

This runs across my tongue like a quick jazz rift...the words tumble like a good run. I enjoyed your work.


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