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More in Cats with Opposed Thumbs, Chalices of Mucus, and Several other Oddities to Avoid Whilst Poeting

boomslang

My voice snakes around your ankles
a soft longing just above your toes
before the hissed kiss and sliding
of skin on skin

At the fork my tongue suggests the bite
of awareness - the scent of heat
the urge for writhing

These are the restless humps of breath
long and drawn in, short and puffed out
that undulate along the edge of touch

There is no forgiveness here among whispered lust
only apologies and the taste of sex.
Laurie - on June 13 2008
Is it warm in here or is it just me.... Whew!!
Aphasic - on June 13 2008

"that undulate long the edge of touch"

Is that meant to be 'along', or is length the overriding issue here?
I'm tempted to suggest that you'd do better ululating here, though in view of your earlier humping (the snake that broke the camel's back), that proposition might just sound like *pants.
[*http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/pants - for definitions, incl. UK adjectival usage]


Anstey - on June 14 2008

I dunno about the ululating...but the along was a mistake! Thanks!

 

YOU are the best 


Aphasic - on June 14 2008
Flattery will get you no ear, you incorrigible snake-charmer...
:>

Anstey - on June 14 2008
When I grow up, i want to be excorrigible or possibly recorrigible... maybe percorrigible.
Aphasic - on June 14 2008
Such aspirations suggest it will never happen :>
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