
Oustanding. This flows so smoothly from stanza to stanza, and I thought the subtle refrain toward the end was a nice touch:)

It's beautiful Norm, I suck at writing love poetry but I appreciate it none the less when someone can!
----- Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.

this is beautiful.
Sometimes I wonder if men and women really suit each other. Perhaps they should live next door and just visit now and then.