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Shakespeare's Monkeys

Infinite Monkeys. Infinite Typewriters.

More in Cats with Opposed Thumbs, Chalices of Mucus, and Several other Oddities to Avoid Whilst Poeting

when

draft
when
for every reason
both of we find
that we are each of us

i will remember when
you changed my ex
pectations

with your finger
tips
with your words
hang
ing
out in space

when for just a mo
ment i'm broken
and for
lorn

i will look back
here

and know
that at this second

it was we who died
when both of us were born

and how we shared this ex
change.
Colleen - on May 23 2008
Ok.. I know this isn't a really helpful comment.. but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this! 
Laurie - on May 23 2008
I like the way the words are broken, it makes for a stilited reading, but I really enjoyed it that way!
Norm - on May 24 2008
This is just perfectly formed. I am jealous of this poem.
Starla - on May 25 2008
I am also jealous. you really draw attention to the important bits with the broken words; an intentional trip! i like it x


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