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The Snake, The Bee and The Apple Tree

Just some dribble

 

"Good afternoon!"
Buzzed the bee,
To the slithering snake
in the apple tree.

This tree is big
as big as two,
 big enough
for me and you.

Slide on over
and you shall see,
there's room for two
in this big tree.

I have an idea,
a thought or two
about this tree and
me and you.

We'll be tree mates,
we'll have it made.
We'll share the apples,
we'll share the shade.

I'll make honey.
You'll guard the tree.
We'll share a pot
of fresh brewed tea.

I'll sting the foe.
You'll bite the prey.
I'll pick wild flowers
 every day.

We'll be tree mates
you and I,
in this big tree
way up high.

So tell me snake
what do you say,
will you be
my friend today?"

"Just be quiet! 
For goodness sake! 
You talk too much,"
Hissed the snake.

"Your buzzing voice
is bugging me.
You're very loud
for a little bee.

There's no room for two,
I disagree.
I can't slide over
in this small tree.

I don't like honey.
I don't drink tea.
I don't share apples.
This here's my tree!

Were not alike
you and me.
I'm a grumpy snake.
You're a pesky bee.

We can't be friends
what will they say,
a snake and a bee?
No how, no way!"

"Well, excuse me!"
Buzzed the bee,
to the slithering snake
in the apple tree.

"There's no need
to offend.
I thought that you
could use a friend.

Your all alone
In this big tree,
without a friend
just like me.
 
It shouldn't matter
what others say.
If there is a will,
there is a way."


"Okay!  Okay!
Give me a break!
Don't start crying,"
hissed the snake.

"Listen here
you pesky bee.
I've got rules
for this tree.

We'll take turns.
We'll share the chores.
The right sides mine,
the left sides yours.

You'll rake the leaves.
I'll mow the yard.
This apple tree
we both will guard.

I'll be your friend
if you agree.
To share the chores
I'll share this tree."

"I'd do agree!"
Buzzed the bee,
to the slithering snake
in the apple tree.

They shared the tree.
They shared the chores.
We all have a friend,
how did you meet yours?

Comments

1- Colleen on May 16 2008

Jen I really enjoyed this... I was really capitivated by the story and the rhyming was so smooth..  I got caught on a few lines..  it could totally be me.. but..here's the ones I had trouble with..


2stanza line 2  "as big a two,"
18stanza line1 "Your all alone"..  You're all alone
21stanza line4 "for this tree."  ...


well those are so minor I hate to even tell you.. I really enjoyed this Jen, it brightened my day!  thank you

2- Shan on May 17 2008

haha, did you write thi about my best friend and I?

 First, I love it, I always enjoy your poems Jen.

 

Some suggestions:

 -  "I can't slide over", how about "I can't even slide over"

  • "I thought that you" , how about "I thought that  perhaps you"

  • "there is a way"; how about "there is always a way"

----- Life is what happens while you wait for great things.




Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Jennifer Ragan

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on May 16 2008
from Camillus, New York

Famous children's author....just nobody knows it yet
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