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tailor

tailor

if you were lying
naked next to me,
lost in dreams,

I would sew you clothes
from words I know,
seamless-syllable stitched
by hand.   ink thread.

I would drape a linen blouse
around you from behind,
wove with arms and heat
and chest-to-back,
pearl buttons of hands
across your breasts,

and sleeves cut long
from wistful and yesterday.

for your feet,
slippers of sand and soft,
soled with journey.

and a sheer skirt
of lips and tongue,
loose folds of fingers
and August sun
would tangle wet
between your legs,

            a sash
            of midnight waiting

            around your waist,
            unknotted
            in morning light.

Alcuin of York - on Apr. 16 2008

Halfway between romantic and just plain horny! It almost made ME wet!

It appears you began with the idea of poetry-as-clothing, and meandered to other things as clothing. It works. It transitions smoothly and rolls us along like a leaf on a stream. The only hiccup I noticed was "pearl buttons of hands"; I think just "pearl button hands" would work better, but in any case, it's a nice piece.

Alcuin


Norm - on Apr. 16 2008
Thank you.
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