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The Arms of Morpheus

 

In the arms of Morpheus.... 

I will fall
from my jagged cloud
twenty fathoms deep,
then witness nothing
but your eyes, clear
blue as mountain air.

I will drown
inside your gods
as they find me, naked
of coming wounds,
floating still in rivers
raging past aqua scars.

In the arms of Morpheus....

I will cry
your shoulders bare,
a thousand questions
silenced with a glance
and tender hands, praying
aloud to saffron skies.

I will wake
the song of doves,
unsung in clover fields
we run through, forever
gathering strands of gold,
as Elysium sacrifices you

to me.

In the arms of Morpheus....

 

 

 

Anstey - on Apr. 12 2008

Hey Kat,

Love where you're going here, first thing that jumped out at me was that the title was cardboard. This piece deserves something zippier I think.


Kat - on Apr. 13 2008
zippier?.....hmmm, any suggestions?
Aphasic - on Apr. 14 2008
Pardon me for interjecting here...
I know it's recognised practice to use a significant line from a poem in the title, so I don't see anything seriously wrong about this title - but if you did want something different..
'The Shape of Things To Come'?
[given that a translation of Morpheus can be 'one who shapes', and that dreams are often regarded as a medium for presentiment, and sometimes augury/prophesy, which refelcts the 'I will' expectations expressed here]


Kat - on Apr. 15 2008

Thanks......you make an interesting observation.....the truth is, I couldn't think of a better name when writing, so I sorta settled for this one......but let me think about your suggestion......it's very metaphysical, which I like.....Kat


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