
Hey Kat,
Love where you're going here, first thing that jumped out at me was that the title was cardboard. This piece deserves something zippier I think.

Pardon me for interjecting here...
I know it's recognised practice to use a significant line from a poem in the title, so I don't see anything seriously wrong about this title - but if you did want something different..
'The Shape of Things To Come'?
[given that a translation of Morpheus can be 'one who shapes', and that dreams are often regarded as a medium for presentiment, and sometimes augury/prophesy, which refelcts the 'I will' expectations expressed here]

Thanks......you make an interesting observation.....the truth is, I couldn't think of a better name when writing, so I sorta settled for this one......but let me think about your suggestion......it's very metaphysical, which I like.....Kat