
I couldn't click on this one fast enough because I anticipate night sweats in my immediate future. Then, I realized the nature of the piece...
Another well wrought, first row seat to the ongoing horrors of war. The "halving" of the piece, first the general description then the specific, works really well on so many levels.

Wow! An incredible poem. "Bisect from widow's peak" is superb. "Half the body remembers" - wonderful imagery. My only suggestion is to give it a stronger beginning. The middle images and the end are so strong. Maybe something better than "an alphabet of symptoms". This is more general than the later, more specific language. Terrific work.

Thanks for the comments and suggestions.
My wife, an RN since 1970, said my night sweats pattern is something she never saw in her career. It is, apparently, not unknown in VA hospitals among Vietnam veterans.