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snowed in

God powders the ground
with cool wet chalk
until the drawings are gone

the details blurred,
the edges soft
and we sink into darker thoughts
of the days since the world died.

the gray-white haze
obscures our view
of houses down the street
of cars coming at us
of the children laughing
as they ride red sleds down
almost-hills
toward once-we-knew roads.

I say,
"You know where the shovel is."

You smile,
"somewhere
somewhere,"
vaguely you gesture,

"out there."
Colleen - on Mar. 2 2008

"of the children laughing
as they ride red sleds down
almost-hills
toward once-we-knew roads"

These lines brought back some fond memories!


Sinnaminsun - on Mar. 2 2008

The following part of your poem stood out to me, though I really like all of it: 

as they ride red sleds down
almost-hills
toward once-we-knew roads.


Anstey - on Mar. 2 2008
Thanks Colleen and Kim! Appreciate that.
Aphasic - on Mar. 3 2008
"until the drawings are gone" - that is a spectacularly brilliant line Anstey - I'm currently obsessed with anything that could be construed as 'meiosis'. So, no change there then...
Intruiging, the contrast between that and "since the world died"...

Jen - on Mar. 3 2008
This is really good Stephan:)
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