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Feeding the Ducks

Daffodils unfurl yellow funnels
as croci raise their purple cups;
the afternoon un-knits its muscling hours,
massaging time with birdsong.
 
The shopping trolleys sleep
in weedy rests at river's edge;
"For Sale" signs go unnoticed
inert on paint-cracked poles;

and everything breathes at last:
electric drills are droning bees;
the joiner's hammer is just a woodpecker;
a passing siren is rapid eye movement.

A train snores across the bridge
as lawnmowers lie out on growing lawns,
and yawning windows invite the air;
and everything breathes at last.

Babies sleep in padded pushchairs
suspended under towpath light;
swans exhale - their necks U-bend
in slow motion, dipping white.

All is birdsong: a roost of wood pigeons,
the ripple-wakes of paddling mallard,
given this day their daily bread
while sun and moon whisper overhead.

Someday In May - on Feb. 20 2008
I really enjoyed this piece. I wish i could offer some sort of suggestion to better it, but in my opinion I wouldn't change anything. The images you bring up are outstanding.
U668857 - on Feb. 20 2008
Many thanks, Someday. It's difficult to avoid poetic cliche' when writing about the Spring...Rgds.,Alan.
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