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Gemstone

a quick thought that blew through my mind

I am
not a diamond
found
in the rough to be
polished, cut
into precious worth

nor am I an opal, black
onyx, or jade
to adorn your arm
when we mingle with
your friends for you to make them
envious

I am not
the rarest stone
to be set under glass
or lock and key

I am
not to be handled,
rather
you should
softly hold my fingertips
as I learn to
breathe,
inhaling the fragrance
my own style
becoming a worthwhile
gemstone
through the erosion
of life.

I am a
gem of un-
explored qualities
that you must allow to
shine in my
own special way

 

 

Pags - on Jan. 28 2008
I particularly like the first 3 stanzas of this. All those nots I rather feel the second half rather looses its way in trying to liken you to an undefined gem. I wonder, might it be better to have two similies, the second likening you to (eg) a delicate insect made from fine gold threads or a flower (real not made from gems) or quicksilver that is fluid and hard to contain. I'm just thinking aloud here...
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