Grab Your Shoes

Better than nothing;)

Don't sit inside.
Go grab your shoes.
Pick a pair
They come in twos.

Slip them on
Your tender feet.
Let's go marching
Down the street.

We'll run,
We'll jump,
We'll skip,
We'll hop.
We'll dance
And spin
Just like a top.

We'll stomp,
We'll splash,
We'll squish
We'll squash
Through a puddle,
Our shoes will slosh.

Oh, what fun things
Your feet can choose.
Outside, inside
A pair of shoes.

1- Anstey on Jan. 17 2008

Through a puddle,
Our shoes will slosh.

For some reason, this line doesn't work for me.

I wanted to read it as:

"Through the puddle where
our shoes kersplosh"

2- Jen on Jan. 18 2008

Hi Steven,

I like your idea and I'll think about it a bit...Thanks:)

3- Rene' on Jan. 19 2008

I kind of thought;

"Through a puddle

our shoes we'll slosh" in keeping with rest of the stanza!

----- could someone turn the world back over, I'm getting dizzy!

I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!

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