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Low Winter Sun

Roof-hugger, blinding horizons;
your obstinate, unfeeling glare
effects a flip down of sun-visors
within our sluggish engine-cold car.
 
You cold-shoulder the morning's glaze
and strain for lift-off, bound
to flat parabola's insipid haze,
you heave to sky from heavy ground.
 
Our heat is light-years gone;
our fiery origins a dying star;
in icy days, a nuisance flare
that irritates with eye of stone.

Pags - on Jan. 10 2008
An appealing poem - I particularly like the first two lines of this but would like to read an ending that has the same impact. (And I do rather like your take on this rather irritating sun. I feel I want you to tell it to buck up its ideas rather than make excuses for it!)
U668857 - on Jan. 10 2008
Thanks, Pags - It can certainly be a damn nuisance - that low sun. Of course, the whole thing is a metaphor for other failing fires...Rgds.,Alan.
Anstey - on Jan. 10 2008
I admire this so much. I wish i wrote it.
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