
Thanks, Stephan
It's a sort of absurdist type thing....a bit like life and death !
Rgds.,
Alan.

What an interesting piece! The analogies are great and unusual. Unless I've read it wrong, S1 seems to contain two references to suited figures: It begins with a mannequin in a store, then shifts to a magic act. If I've gotten it right, then why did you not parse them into separate stanzas? Or have I misunderstood?
I like the "fuelled night" phrase, though there are other gems throughout the write.
Alcuin

Thanks, Alcuin
Yes I sort of morphed the floor attendant into a stage magician when he pulled the mannequin apart! Maybe I should make that clearer...Rgds.,Alan.

No, Alan. I like it as is. I suggest leaving it. I didn't detect the morphing, but it still worked fine for me. I was merely curious.
Alcuin