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Prison Break

from Tracey's writing prompt "Contained in a prison of perceived powerlessness"

 

I sat and pondered, then I pondered and sat
Idly stroked the soft silky hair of my old tabby cat

Paws drowsily twitched beside me in feigned prowess
Contained in a prison of perceived powerlessness

I paced up the hallway, and then I paced back again
My rapid brain waves moving from mundane to insane

After three hours, two minutes and a bad Charlie horse
I shuffled six more steps before I finally changed course

Took just one more brief moment to wallow in pity
Sighed and smiled and accidentally stepped on the kitty

Before I shook my head and took back my life
Decided to cut through the red tape with a knife

So now the prison bars have been irreparably bent
And in my soul there is no longer a space for rent

 

1- Rene on Oct. 14 2007

I love where you went with this Shannon! The turn/twist of the last line is simply quite awesome and mane me say, "wow" when I reached the end. Great job with the prompt.
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Rene'


I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!

2- Tracey on Oct. 16 2007

Great work, Shanster! When I read this out loud a "hear" a few things slightly different. What I hear may or may not appeal to  you -- certainly this is fine as is.

 

I sat and I pondered, then pondered and sat
Stroked idly the soft silky hair of my cat

Paws drowsily twitching in feigned dream prowess
While I stayed imprisoned - perceived powerlessness

I paced up the hallway, then paced back again
Brain waves rapidly moving - mundane to insane

Took three hours, two minutes, a bad Charlie horse
and six shuffled steps 'fore I finally changed course

Just one more brief moment to wallow in pity
A sigh and a smile, a misstep on the kitty

I shook my head clear and I took back my life
And I cut through the fraying red tape with a knife

Now those prison bars are irreparably bent
And my soul is no longer a space for cheap rent


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~~~t~~~
Shannon McEwen

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on Oct. 13 2007
from Canada

Sharp like a wet noodle
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