2- Tracey
on Oct. 16 2007
Great work, Shanster! When I read this out loud a "hear" a few things slightly different. What I hear may or may not appeal to you -- certainly this is fine as is.
I sat and I pondered, then pondered and sat
Stroked idly the soft silky hair of my cat
Paws drowsily twitching in feigned dream prowess
While I stayed imprisoned - perceived powerlessness
I paced up the hallway, then paced back again
Brain waves rapidly moving - mundane to insane
Took three hours, two minutes, a bad Charlie horse
and six shuffled steps 'fore I finally changed course
Just one more brief moment to wallow in pity
A sigh and a smile, a misstep on the kitty
I shook my head clear and I took back my life
And I cut through the fraying red tape with a knife
Now those prison bars are irreparably bent
And my soul is no longer a space for cheap rent
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3- Shan
on Oct. 16 2007
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
1- Rene
on Oct. 14 2007
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Rene'
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!