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thoughts standing on Lake Erie, frozen all the way to Canada

during the winter of 1993, Lake Erie froze all the way across from the United States to Canada. despite warnings about falling through ice dunes, I walked out about one mile before returning to shore. it was -15 and the wind was incredible.

 

thoughts standing on Lake Erie,
frozen all the way to Canada

 
I stood on the ice
and wished I could  walk
to Canada.

 
twenty-five miles,
dressed warm,
some food in a pack.

 
it would take a day,
and of course
there would be the arrest
on the other side.

 
such things are illegal now.

 
there was a time
when the penalty was falling
into a seam in the ice,
lying undiscovered and frozen.

 
but imagine
reaching the other shore
after not falling
through the ice,
after all the wind
and cold
and uncertainty.

 
imagine someone saying,
"This is Canada.
 Where are you from?"

 

Comments

Anstey - on Sep. 26 2007

Dude! Ya coulda died!!!!

:) glad you didn't. This is good stuff.


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  • stephan

Norm - on Sep. 27 2007
Thanks. I have a friend who made it to within a mile of Canada, but then he and his hiking partner encountered a slip of open water that apparently ran the length of the lake. They looked for a passage. Finding none, they spent the night on the ice and walked back to Erie, PA the next day. He told me his wife was livid that he did something like that. It was the classic "Old-enougn-to-know-better" argument.
Alcuin of York - on Sep. 27 2007

The writing is deceptively simple, casual, conversational. In parsing the language, I see how carefully it's been crafted. I was reading some of Hart Crane the other night, till I couldn't take it any longer. It's nice to find something like this - well written in ordinary language.

Alcuin


Norm - on Sep. 27 2007
Thanks for your kind words.
Leanne - on Sep. 27 2007
Norm, this is such a quiet and thoughtful poem but amazingly, it shouts to me of a desperation to find a new frontier, to have another adventure left in a world where everything seems to be already mapped and done.  I very much enjoyed this.
Norm - on Sep. 27 2007
Why, thank you.
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