
I love the theme and the ideas expressed. They form a wonderful image. I think some of the expression is a bit wordy: "leech out of" instead of "leech from"; "all that has passed before my eyes / throughout the years of my life" instead of "I've seen throughout my years"; "each spring of my life" instead of "each spring". In short, great idea, great images, and I think the order of exposition is good. It just needs some paring down.
Also, you might consider "Leaves" for a title, though the current title works.
Alcuin

Thank you so much my friend! This is the first write (there have been no changes at all, straight from the heart and the pen, first draft). I have not had time yet to go back and do a rewrite as I have had so much homework to do. I will get back to it soon and will be around to read for you soon as well. I always appreciate and look forward to you comments and suggestions! I find them uplifting and helpful.
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Rene'
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!

Hi Rene! I have missed reading your poems! I really like this one and can identify with the sentiments. I look forward to more!

Thank you Laurie, so nice to see you! I am not on as much since school had started again and I am taking 16 hours this semester (what was I thinking??).
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Rene'
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!