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In the End

 

I'm still a virgin
after 14 years of marriage
and birthing two children;
he never knew me.

 

 


Alcuin of York - on Sep. 2 2007

Interesting & succinct. I'd love to see it lengthened into a full poem (i.e., one that developed the theme - why you were strangers, why the choice of mates, where it leaves you, etc.). The refrain, 'still a virgin' could be occasionally repeated.

Alcuin


Kat - on Sep. 3 2007
Thank you.....I will eventually expand it into a longer poem, but it's not ready to be written yet......Kat
Colleen - on Sep. 3 2007
Very interesting concept..... I look forward to reading more!! 
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