
I totally dig this, Alcuin. The rhyme scheme (is this a form I've yet to learn about?), the meter, the title, the theme...it all works for me. I am enjoying reading it over and over again.

I echo Tracey's comments. That was great fun to read, and the rhyme pattern never once felt forced.

With Love, The Night Prophet
With Love,
The Night Prophet

Well, I'm a heartless cadaver, embalmed in cynicism, so I felt distincly at home in this manifestly mausolean chamber of poetic fixtures and fittings
No idea what that means, but I guess it's my version of post-prandial eructation...

Ah, Laura, Laura, Laura,
don't you understand that in this era of reality TV and all-day texting, we're all supposed to belch forth our feelings impulsively? Deliberately doing anything is...soooo passé, soooo artificial.
I wonder if this has anything to do with electing the Bushwhacker twice and the current panic of health 'death panels'?
Naaaahh!
Then again, doesn't 'the beating heart' (of the writer) beat on a regular rhythm (trochaic, I think)?

Trochaic for the well-adjusted, iambic for those with regressive tendencies. Well-rehearsed improvisation is but a systolic memory packaged in high-pressure capsules available on free prescription from local NHS trusts.
Warning: on-demand remedies may damage your wealth and scramble your SIM card.

I was drawn to this because I like rhyme, and because of the word play, logic and multiple topics throughout.

Rhyme and meter add style to insiteful and cynical wit - it might not pull the heartstrings but it provokes a thoughtful response.
Aspiration pursued and attained requires guile and compromised principles; aspiration negelected leads to disaffection and discontent. Interestingly, that last stanza put in mind Gray's Elegy as a sort of counterpoint were the humble swain is valued and attains contentment despite the lack of perceived success ...
It plays provocatively with contemporary socio-economic issues... Rgds., Alan