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Dreams - A Collection

Success

It's said ‘success comes not to the faint of heart'.
Indeed, it calls on those whose practiced arts
are feigning smarts and quick-time verbal darts
and teethy smiles,
disarming wiles
and deals in secret swung
and genuflections sung
to those with purse well-hung.


Career

Men mingle, paired or single, round a room,
propelled by pasted smiles - to orbit whom?
They seek the sun for warmth - return to womb,
or hope in turn
themselves to burn.
Bizarre, this solar system - gaseous giants
spin nearest Sol, yet barely move - pretense                      
of proper orbit, faking comet's brilliance.


Money

Discovered destitution disappoints.
Impaled by chance on economic points,
your snazzy home or sporty car disjoints.
Perhaps someday
you'll make your way
to sunny Shangri-la -
like salmon you once saw,
regain U-to-pi-a.


Sex

Nocturnal dreams come either dry or wet;
diurnal thoughts envision perfect pet -
another's mate or office bait - and yet
when heart impels
to ring their bells
your partner will suffice.
Imagined bods entice -
and make you do it twice.


Sleepless Dreams

I've seen the harried man whose nights were tossed
by hopes that morphed to monsters, sourly sauced
by thoughts his aspirations might be lost:
What never was
and never does
might never do or be -
from nothing gained, you see,
regards himself in poverty.


Dreamless Sleep

I've seen spent men with minds devoid of dreams -
who lost the gleam that lit their morning schemes;
or never gazed at stars or mused extremes;
the young heart idled
from passions bridled -
complacent sauntering cow;
compliant mule at plow,
now stuck in the ruts of his brow.

Alcuin of York

Comments

Tracey - on Aug. 27 2007
I totally dig this, Alcuin. The rhyme scheme (is this a form I've yet to learn about?), the meter, the title, the theme...it all works for me. I am enjoying reading it over and over again.
Norm - on Aug. 27 2007

 

I echo Tracey's comments. That was great fun to read, and the rhyme pattern never once felt forced. 


Colleen - on Aug. 27 2007
I have to agree with everyone else.. this was so enjoyable!! 
The Night Prophet - on June 26 2009

 

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With Love, The Night Prophet
 
You are so lost in your technical ideologies that your poem does not have one ounce of passion. You lost my interest by the third line. 
 
Poetry is not mathematical.
 
Poetry is the beating heart of the writer.
 
 



With Love,

The Night Prophet
Laura doom - on Aug. 15 2009

Well, I'm a heartless cadaver, embalmed in cynicism, so I felt distincly at home in this manifestly mausolean chamber of poetic fixtures and fittings

No idea what that means, but I guess it's my version of post-prandial eructation...


Melden Fred - on Aug. 15 2009

 Ah, Laura, Laura, Laura,

don't you understand that in this era of reality TV and all-day texting, we're all supposed to belch forth our feelings impulsively? Deliberately doing anything is...soooo passé, soooo artificial.

I wonder if this has anything to do with electing the Bushwhacker twice and the current panic of health 'death panels'?

Naaaahh!

Then again, doesn't 'the beating heart' (of the writer) beat on a regular rhythm (trochaic, I think)?


Laura doom - on Aug. 15 2009

Trochaic for the well-adjusted, iambic for those with regressive tendencies. Well-rehearsed improvisation is but a systolic memory packaged in high-pressure capsules available on free prescription from local NHS trusts.



Warning: on-demand remedies may damage your wealth and scramble your SIM card.


Sinnaminsun - on Aug. 22 2009

I was drawn to this because I like rhyme, and because of the word play, logic and multiple topics throughout. 


U668857 - on Aug. 26 2009

Rhyme and meter add style to insiteful and cynical wit - it might not pull the heartstrings but it provokes a thoughtful response.

Aspiration pursued and attained requires guile and compromised principles; aspiration negelected leads to disaffection and discontent. Interestingly, that last stanza put in mind Gray's Elegy as a sort of counterpoint were the humble swain is valued and attains contentment despite the lack of perceived success ...

It plays provocatively with contemporary socio-economic issues... Rgds., Alan


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