2- Kzealy
on Aug. 24 2007
Thanks Stephan, I also left out the last 3 lines. So much for cut and paste
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1- Anstey
on Aug. 23 2007
First of all, I can't quite decide if this works for me or not. I Haven't seen the picture, which I think is probably good. I am looking only at the words, the shape as you laid it out, and trying to devine your intent from that.
All of the language seems high-brow, and to some degree unemotional, clinincal in fact, in direct contrast with the meaning of the words. Its a contrast that I think adds a layer of victorian passion which i do like.
I also like the alternating use of glotal, velar and bilabials. It actually makes my mouth feel like it's getting a message as I read it.
I think Quasi-angelic is hyphenated.
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