
I think the poem works well in this form, although "The cowboy's" repeatedly did get cumberson reading outloud.
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.

The poem works very nicely as a villanelle! I have never seen the play on the repeating lines before but you pulled it off with grace. I love the villanelle, it has a softness with its repeating lines.
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I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!