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May 17, 2025  

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Minneapolis, Aug 1, 2007

Release candidate

I fat & short
then soft
then tall ...

each bridge once aloft
then not
then fall.

bespectacled diety stomps the life
of another dead man's half-loved wife

I brick & long
then tied
then steel

each tale dyed
then said
then real

Thanatos sputters a toothy wreath
then butterflies 'cross river lethe

I hand & tears
then sun
then well

each bridge a gun
then shot
then hell

little god creeps west to east
trust me, then you then them the least

then me
then you

retreat
retreat.

Alcuin of York - on Aug. 8 2007
Don't release yet. Sit on it for another day or two. Believe me, I speak fro mucho bad experiences. In any case, 2 of your 3 2-liners rhyme; the 2nd doesn't, and that really sticks out. I love the "trust me, then you then them the least".

Alcuin


Anstey - on Aug. 8 2007
Your thoughts are helpful and appreciated as always Papa Smurf!
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