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ix. Grandfather: knock knock

Ascending the stairs iambically
first tap of cane, then thud of foot.

He smiles, wishing for days of
spondees. The sunlight

a moment of joy painting
cotton soft memories upon
his wizened face .

Disturbing his meter,

the wooden stairs creak slightly
beneath his leather shod feet

the light by the door is still on
and the sounds of morning bustle
give a gentle cadance to the crisp air.

Love, Love, Love
and life, with death

knocking on the door.

 

 

Mic - on Jul. 10 2007

Really love this one, Stephan! I thought a few of the articles weren't needed, but that is just my thought on this very moving write.

--mic

Ascending the stairs iambically
first tap of cane, then thud of foot.

He smiles, wishing for days of
spondees. The sunlight

a moment of joy painting
cotton soft memories upon
his wizened face .

Disturbing his meter,

the
wooden stairs creak slightly
beneath his leather shod feet

the light by the door is still on
and the sounds of morning bustle
give a gentle cadance to the crisp air.

Love, Love, Love
and life, with death

knocking on the door.


Anstey - on Jul. 10 2007
Thanks Mic! I appreciate the thought. I'll definitely consider that. I'm not quite sure what i think, but I definitely see what you're saying.
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  • stephan

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