
Really love this one, Stephan! I thought a few of the articles weren't needed, but that is just my thought on this very moving write.
--mic
Ascending the stairs iambically
first tap of cane, then thud of foot.
He smiles, wishing for days of
spondees. The sunlight
a moment of joy painting
cotton soft memories upon
his wizened face .
Disturbing his meter, wooden stairs creak slightly
the
beneath his leather shod feet
the light by the door is still on
and the sounds of morning bustle
give a gentle cadance to the crisp air.
Love, Love, Love
and life, with death
knocking on the door.

Thanks Mic! I appreciate the thought. I'll definitely consider that. I'm not quite sure what i think, but I definitely see what you're saying.
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- stephan