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foundling

from my Snow White poems

foundling

not that they needed someone
to clean and cook.
the cottage was immaculate,
uncluttered,
concise,

and food filled
and fed them well.

each little chair and cup,
each bed and window
and curtain
was perfectly pitched
against the other.
the civil sameness
of order.

but when she wandered
winsome and wistful
within those walls,

rearranging arrangements,
cutting flowers, framing
herself in the doorway
waiting for them-

     oh, that raven hair,
     porcelain skin and
     round red lips

Leanne - on Jul. 7 2007
Well now, that's an interesting take: she really wasn't needed at all, and served no purpose except to add beauty. Do you know, I think that's far more artistic than putting a princess to work as a domestic servant. She becomes the painting on the wall, or the bright fluffy cushion on the sofa, or the retro purple toaster. She is -- unexpected and a little chaotic -- their aesthetic saviour. I like this very, very much.
Alcuin of York - on Jul. 7 2007

Hmm. Can a smurf play at the dwarfs' house?

I especially liked the "perfectly pitched" sentence. It's sparse, concise, and original, aws well as alliterative.

Papa S. Alcuin


Callooh - on Jul. 8 2007

Leanne, there was a question she was needed? silly little brainless apple crunching bunt.... ah well it would be a sad world indeed if 12 height challenged, but otherwise healthy and vigorous men couldn't come home to a pure unspoiled beauty who also cleaned house.

sorry, absolutely usless and flippant review, but I do have a brain injury and I can't help myself sometimes.


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ruth
Pags - on Jul. 14 2007

I so like this poem - its the end that makes it. I keep coming back to read it! I don't have anything sensible to say, but wanted you to know my admiration...


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