
Very nice, Janelle. In S1L2, you might consider, "Rich almond color". This is very nice, simple, effective, sweet. Not much to comment on here because the poem says it all, and well.
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Gazing upon me Color of rich almonds I see my universe born In eyes that are mine “Hi baby…” I sigh Intoxicating! Salty rivers flow down flushed cheeks leaving trails of wet happiness Life begins, with a wail. Fullness of breasts Pulling her close to me Smelling of sour sweetness Sleepy bubbles on rose petal lips Years sweep away, like the tides Skipping across tall grass Wildflowers strewn through Unruly chestnut hair Eruptions of giggles My immortality, complete
Comments![]() Very nice, Janelle. In S1L2, you might consider, "Rich almond color". This is very nice, simple, effective, sweet. Not much to comment on here because the poem says it all, and well. Alcuin |
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