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More in Beneath the baby moon: the ramblings of Janelle

Mother

 

 

 

 

Caked Mother Earth cracks

Beneath bare feet

Leaving

sand covering delicate toes

Once I asked

where

the water had gone

Answers lie covered beneath

deaf ears

Struggles to recall

fragrance of lupins in the air

distant memories

unable to reach

Flowers long since wilted

Seeking fertile lands,

blistered soles trudge on

Fighting back

an acrid thirst unable to quench

Abandonment

of cool breezes

fleeing

this desolate heat

Feeling her slip

with the sands

I move towards the horizon

promise of a new day

I no longer need this barren place.

 

Comments

White_Feather - on June 23 2007

You have the makings of a powerful piece here - the imagery is wonderful.  I think you have the same challenge I have, though, which is using too many words when there is more impact to being as succinct as possible.  It's so hard when you love words, and love to talk!


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